My First Beta Review

I’ve recently received my first beta review and, Dear Reader, I’d like to share that experience with you. My sincerest desire is that my story of survival will give hope to those of you going through similar tragedy.

So begins the review of the first beta review of my book, The Sarimist Loyal. A beta review review if you will. Or critique critique. Whatever you’d like to call it. A rose by any other name still has its thorns and jagged, rotary mandible. All the better for eating up your dreams like a trash disposal.

And, so there is no confusion going forward, this is not a review of the beta below. (Though if it were, I’d have to say it is an excellent specimen, albeit a bit of an asshole.)

A majestic red beta, silently mocking my book. A book which fell short of the majesty that is this fish.
Majestic but judgmental. You see it. The way it looks at you. Like it’s better than you and it knows it. It’s not wrong but… it still hurts.
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For Real This Time

(Before we start, you can read January’s (and all past issues) of ARTS Magazine by clicking here. I have an article in there every month so you know they are only accepting the highest of quality! Now, onward!)

My hiatus is over, for real this time. I know, Dear Reader, I’m a flake. But, here and now, I shout my commitment to the void.

I will make this blog a success!

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My eyes wandered over Narmo as he piloted the ship. I’d never seen him worse off.  It made me feel guilty, sitting here in pristine condition while he was so dirty and beat down. His black t-shirt and jeans were in tatters and his arm didn’t look much better. He had shifted his white hair to hang over the shaved side of his head, hiding the recently obtained gash. A little piece of ear was missing where one of his piercings tore out. The rest were intact, including that damned nose ring.

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A Second to Think

Written for Chuck Wendig’s Flash Fiction Challenge: The Complications of Heroism.

A Second to Think

The thing about being a hero? It was never said that people would agree with me. That they would understand. That I would be recognized for my contribution.

It mattered little as the city burned on the horizon. My home. The place I had lived. Loved.

It burned so that our world wouldn’t have to. A strange thing to see, a fire fixed in place.

Six gods stood before me. Poised to strike. Frozen in time for the sake of my selfish contemplation.

Murdoch. I was honored. It was, in part, to him we owed thanks. Thanks for a chance at life. A chance to be better than we had turned out.

Karael. Goddess of Light. First angel. This purity is what I fought for. It wouldn’t last.

Son. Dragon God. Blocker of my view by way of his immensity. I wanted desperately to look on the world behind him. Was it as dismal there as the rest?

Celedirian. The Rinezhal God. First son of man and Demon.

Aegrym. God of Death. Last of original giants. I hated him. I thought to end him if given a chance. But he had a purpose to serve. The world needed Blight.

Chaos. Wearing his foolish mask. Being a hero himself. Thinking no one would know. For the first time, I admired him. I would keep his secret.

Odium was absent, though his demons weren’t. They fought alongside Murdoch’s angels. Even that wretched woman’s undead. Their enemy?

A horde of Nyth’s nightmares, straight from the abyss. She was a fearful planet. With good reason. She knew what I knew.

But this hadn’t turned out well for me. Good aligned with evil, all for the sake of seeing me destroyed.

No. This was good. When time came for them to face their true challenge, maybe they would be ready.

Do I try to explain myself? They wouldn’t believe me.

At any rate, I deserved this. The only way I could be a hero was to be a villain.

To kill the four my home lauded as heroes. Those I once held as heroes myself. The Incorruptible. I needed to know for sure that their title was deserved. Corruption had proven as strong a force in them as anyone else.

I felt guilt over the fourth. Not regret. But, if not for me, she may never have fallen. It had been necessary all the same. She would be my light in the darkness. My reminder after death. Why I held on. Why they could kill me but never be rid of me.

My gaze was locked longingly on what little I could see of the sky behind them, eager for one more glimpse of sun. I had blotted that out. In its place were thick clouds of abyss. Ink-black wyrms weaved throughout them numbering well beyond thousands.

Had I made a mistake? No. If not for this, my people would have brought about our end willingly. Corruption would have damned us all.

At least, that is the tapestry my nightmares wove before me. All threads led to Nyth’s abrupt end. In all iterations. In all realities.

Had I wanted to undo what I had done, I couldn’t. I cannot reverse time. Nor can I skip ahead to see the results of my actions. I can merely pause. I am allowed nothing but to wallow. In my thoughts. My hopes. Dreams. Doubts. Fears.

The city burned. Corruption burned. But the flames made no allowances for the pure. Children burned so children may live. So I told myself.

Had I missed something? Was there a better alternative? I could spend eternity in the chrysalis of this moment. The world would be spared the fate that comes. No. That thought was hubris of the highest fashion. They cared not whether time stopped forever. They would still come.

This second had lasted long enough. I released my control over the moment. Let the passage of time return to normal.

They could kill me. It would only give me more time to…

It was over before I could blink.